Okay, obvious perspective in the bin kind of mistake. Truthfully, did not see it coming out this wrong when drawing it. When I think back how the h I made such horrific mistake, I realized I was sitting, looking down, with a glass window in the way, plus having the drawing pad in my hand prohbited me standing back to look at my drawing at a distance. All of these reasons made it look ridiculous.
I shall improve on my sketching setup next time, to avoid discouraging results. At lease the value study was not totally a failure, I also have a chance to observe the water movement in life, study how to express wave and bubbles... should this perhaps be my next study focus?
last drapery of this trimester, i think it was good focus, I am less scared of drapery now. Still need to work on seeing values and designing them. Don't know to to improve that yet. Tell me if you know how, please!